Davwyn and Solaria  Starwisp and cute minidrake duo Posts: 39[Male] | Jun 18, 2022 10:43 AM Re: Alina Dakar |
| One suggestion: Please define how to power the Transmatter transubstantial transmorgifier, and what it's limitations are. It requires substantial power but how do you get that power in? Does it have some kind of super battery, does it need to be hooked up to the power grid? What sort of things can it make as if it can spit out fusion reactors it can resolve it's own power source limitations in an instant. If it can make complex devices out of raw materials it can very quickly make just about any other tool, weapon, or device including duplicating itself. Etc. Applying some kind of limitation to the device to give it some kind of bounds helps, even if those limitations are intangible such as only the character knows how to use it, and she lacks the ingenuity to simply side-step certain limitations. | |
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Eli  Fluff of Fluffs Posts: 128 | Jun 18, 2022 10:55 AM Re: Alina Dakar |
| Added httpclarifications httpto httpthe httptransmorgifier. | |
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| Eli Fluff of Fluffs Posts: 128 | Jun 18, 2022 10:57 AM Re: Alina Dakar |
| edited httpkW | |
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| Davwyn and Solaria Starwisp and cute minidrake duo Posts: 39[Male] | Jun 18, 2022 10:59 AM Re: Alina Dakar |
| Character httplooks httpfun httpand httpcan httpbe httpa httpgood httpsource httpof httpchaos. httpJust httpgive httpother httpplayers httpunfamiliar httpwith httpthe httpcharacter httpan httpOOC httptip httpthat httpshe's httpa httpvillain httpand httploose httpcannon httpas httpplayers httpmay httpnot httpwant httpto httpput httpparticular httpcharacters httpin httpplay. | |
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Koen  | Jun 19, 2022 3:55 AM Re: Alina Dakar |
Approved, with the standard boilerplate warning | |
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