Eli  Fluff of Fluffs Posts: 128 | Aug 14, 2023 7:22 PM Re: March of the Machines |
| On the evening of the 20th, there was a major incident. Air raid sirens sounded and people would've observed the MAF scrambling all aircraft. A few minutes later, Lord Horologium themselves appeared over Marsilion, coming to rest over the lake. They called for "Unit 179827198798423231" to reveal themselves, and deployed stationary machine towers around the city which disrupted extra-spatial effects. After apparently finding their quarry, Lord Horologium then proceeded to take 2% of the transformed population by forcing them to march towards the main tower. General Lance called upon the citizenry to try and stop any who were being taken and also ordered the MAF's FG-2 Bandicoots to fire upon the new stationary towers, damaging them and rendering them inoperable. The mayor was among those who were attempted to be kidnapped, but luckily a guard was able to intervene and immobilize them until the effect passed, at which point they returned to normal. The MAF is going to be investigating the damaged towers Horologium dropped, and ordering citizens to keep their distance. | |
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Koen  | Aug 31, 2023 6:49 PM Re: March of the Machines |
| Plot Review Did you participate in this play? Indirectly What were some things you really liked about the plot? It was a way to get players involved, an overarching story with plot to solve. Where did this plot fail and need to improve? there was a lot going on, and was difficult to follow. How fun was this plot? 8 How was player participation? 8 How was staff participation? 8 How was plot creativity? 8 Would you like more plots like this in the future? Yes | |
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Davwyn and Solaria  Starwisp and cute minidrake duo Posts: 39[Male] | Aug 31, 2023 6:54 PM Re: March of the Machines |
| Plot Review Did you participate in this play? Directly What were some things you really liked about the plot? Everyone got to try out new forms, tons of cross-character interactions happened between both familiar and new characters, and everyone had a chance to get a life changing experience out of their respective roles. On top of that, everyone that was interested was able to play an important part in the event, big or small. Where did this plot fail and need to improve? The only need I saw was we need players to work harder at posting into the forum thread character events going on so everyone is up to speed. Many details were often left out or not mentioned making players have to read gigantic back logs or otherwise suffer missing out on a lot of important details. One big excuse was players not having knowledge of specific events. That doesn't matter. Put OOC details under an OOC information clause, so people know what is going on with the plot. Just make it clear what knowledge most characters would have vs most would not. It was stressful for some players as they felt if they didn't read every log, they couldn't take part. How fun was this plot? 10 How was player participation? 9 How was staff participation? 10 How was plot creativity? 10 Would you like more plots like this in the future? Yes | |
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